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24 Responses to “IELTS Argument Essay Writing 1 (3 of 4)”

1. highang // May 31, 2010 at 6:07 am

   I wish i have see this before, i been taking the writting for many time and still fail, so hope after watch this video i will pass..
   i think i will be a super senior…cause of this test
   well thank so much for this VDO

2. MrRamyadavs // May 31, 2010 at 6:30 am

   It is very helpful…Thank you Ryan

3. LoveBigTime // May 31, 2010 at 6:56 am

   This is very useful. I will use this strategy in my writing test.
   Thank you so much

4. Ms12buckle // May 31, 2010 at 7:37 am

   very much simple,clear and can understand easily.easy to grasp

5. 98764455 // May 31, 2010 at 7:49 am

   This is not a good essay at all

6. Archer6633 // May 31, 2010 at 8:37 am

   Thx man

7. aamol4u // May 31, 2010 at 9:16 am

   essay is really nice but the only thing which i thought that the words motivation and discipline are used huge…are there any other words

8. heartzmechanic // May 31, 2010 at 9:22 am

   nice JOb !!

9. ahmedaegypt // May 31, 2010 at 9:24 am

   Thanks alot for your great effort.

10. umangpokharel // May 31, 2010 at 9:27 am

    thanks.good on you

11. lactium // May 31, 2010 at 10:06 am

    very clear
    understanding

12. kakrali99 // May 31, 2010 at 10:30 am

    Thank you very much for providing these useful videos which helps the needy students. Keep on!

    God/Allah bless you ( Ameen)

13. paniyao // May 31, 2010 at 11:26 am

    I am trying to teach argument essay in my class too,this is a different style..The question is,is it going to work on my students advantage in the Academic/General essay writing in the IELTS?? Thank you anyway I appreciate your diligence..I would like to comment on the use of fragment sentences in essay writing it should be avoided.

14. viewpl // May 31, 2010 at 11:57 am

    What’s the meaning of “in-tune”?

15. antetchie // May 31, 2010 at 12:24 pm

    I would like to ask if you have an example for task 1 essay writing for academic.thanks

16. sanjaysaini83 // May 31, 2010 at 12:43 pm

    i am really thankful to you.you are a great teacher as well as a good thinker. you are able to assess the needs of a desired student.

17. sascorea // May 31, 2010 at 1:40 pm

    I greatly appreciate your elaborate explanation. Thanks to you, I’ve managed to grasp the structure of argument essay.

18. EnglishRyan // May 31, 2010 at 2:30 pm

    Did you watch video 1 and 2 of this series? In video 1, I write the introduction paragraph and include a thesis that states the position for the essay. This position is followed throughout the essay.

    Good luck

19. ihdamas28 // May 31, 2010 at 2:46 pm

    sorry for that one…some teachers encourage that when writing an argument essay, it is better to state your position in the introduction paragraph. Like to agree or not to agree.. thanks!

20. EnglishRyan // May 31, 2010 at 3:46 pm

    Hi, thanks for the comment.

    I am not sure I understand what you are saying. Please rephrase your question and send it to me as a personal message.

21. ihdamas28 // May 31, 2010 at 4:41 pm

    got question here.. some teacher encourage when writing the introduction to state your position in an argument questions? please help me regarding this matter because its really confusing.
    Thanks! great videos by the way! hope to watch more….

22. henrongyijizhu // May 31, 2010 at 5:09 pm

    very helpful.

23. henrongyijizhu // May 31, 2010 at 5:33 pm

    Thank you for such good techniques. I gree that human teachers can not be replaced, but I am greatful to have the technology such like this to learn.

24. monicazhu526 // May 31, 2010 at 6:11 pm

    COOL.